The sentence beginning, 'There are no rallies ...' is entirely ambiguous. I imagine that the writer is saying that the reason there are no rallies or complaints is that most men have escaped 'this cultural curse', but, without a comma before 'because', the sentence could just as easily mean that Dior Homme does make size 40 waist jeans, but not because most men have escaped:
When using 'because' a good rule of thumb is to think about these two sentences: 1. I knew she'd been crying because she looked ugly - in this one her ugliness has provoked her tears. 2. I knew she'd been crying, because she looked ugly - in this, her ugliness is caused by her tears.
When proofreaders go missing: a blog of errors, designed to demonstrate why sub-editors and copy editors remain important, at a time when they are increasingly regarded as optional extras (all contributions welcome; to follow on Twitter - zmkc)
Friday, 26 August 2011
Thursday, 25 August 2011
Wednesday, 17 August 2011
Check those Facts
On one page of the Australian yesterday there was this chart, which indicated that all but two of the High Court bench have been appointed by Labor:
On the opposite page, we were told that 'it is worth remembering a majority of the court - four - were appointed by the Howard government':
Which is true?
On the opposite page, we were told that 'it is worth remembering a majority of the court - four - were appointed by the Howard government':
Which is true?
Saturday, 6 August 2011
So True
They're certainly ruling the Sydney Morning Herald. Apparently nobody there can actually be bothered to check whether all the necessary words appear on the printed page.
Wednesday, 3 August 2011
Sack that Sub
Hey Sydney Morning Herald, I don't mean to be rude, but the person who worked on your Murray-Darling article in today's edition made a total hash of the job:
A Clean Energy Future
Is gas a renewable, as this sentence from the federal government's Clean Energy Future advertisement seems to imply:
Commas Make Sense
In Nikki Savva's article in yesterday's Australian, a couple of commas, plus a semi-colon, would have made things clearer:
Today, in the Sydney Morning Herald, there were places where commas were missing:
and others where they really should not have appeared (why is there one after 'Glenn Stevens?):
Today, in the Sydney Morning Herald, there were places where commas were missing:
and others where they really should not have appeared (why is there one after 'Glenn Stevens?):
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