Here Are Some I Made Earlier

In a ridiculous impression of an emu, I've not been reading the papers a lot lately, because the news has been so horrible (plus, when I've wanted to, I've been prevented.) However, I do have a few old errors saved up from issues of the Australian that appeared before the Japan earthquake - and I do intend to pull myself together and be a grown-up and start reading papers once again.

The first three examples here contain straight out errors :

The second two badly need some well-placed commas, in my view: